the feedback I liked was that  my article is set out well, that my image is suitable for the article, my fonts are good and my pull quotes are good. Advice that I liked was that I needed more pull quotes, I could put a pull quote in the article, it's too plain and I need to fill in space. Something I like on other peoples' is how to do an effect on the background.

front cover first version

this is my first version of my front cover and I gave it to my teachers for them to give me feedback and for me to then improve my cover using their feedback. the feedback that I got was to move the masthead down so you can see it easier, I also got told to vary my fonts for the plugs and i got told to make the 'creamfields revisited' title bigger and brighter. I chose my central image because it is a big and dominant image that takes up a lot of the front cover which emphasises that the person on the front cover is important. I chose the selected pose because it has little expression on his face and that is what I wanted because that is what appeals to the target audience as they are often represented to have little facial expression. I chose the plugs to be in white so that it can stand out from the blue background and make it easier to read.

I chose the background colour of my double page spread because it is a colour which attracts to the target audience because the audience like bright colours such as blue and purple. I organised the text into columns so it's more organised and easier to read. I put the picture on the other side with a pull quote above it and the pull quote is outlined to make it stand out more. some feedback I got was to add more pull quotes in the empty spaces and make the image larger.

I took my images for my magazine in my house. I took it against a wall because I knew that i would not be using the background for the cover so the background didn't matter. I took the photo in a well lighted room so that the photo was good enough quality.

my peer assessment sheet

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